Word and Image
August 16, 2009 § 2 Comments
Wow, your poem is very…flavorful! I like the idea of this poem.
Reading and looking at your poem makes me hungry. I like your last line the most, “Life is like a Pepperoni pizza, the more you bite into it, the better it gets”. I never heard anyone compare life to food, and I think it makes a great connection. The pizza also looks like a cup with ice in it. Maybe you wanted it to look that way too. To quote from your piece, your poem “is delicious”.
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