August 23, 2009 § 1 Comment

Here is Jessica and Rachael’s poem involving ocean waves hitting the sand. The visual is of waves as seen from the shore.

Group Poem – Ocean waves.doc


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  • valeriefox says:

    Some quite effective repeating and word choice here, a kind of Juliana Spahr feeling/tone. The ordinary words become building blocks. You take something that could have been cliche and make it your own.
    Prof. Fox

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