Word and Image
June 6, 2010 § 4 Comments
I really liked your visual poem. Even if the shape is simple, I liked how you talked about the versatility of a star. I feel like it was well thought and the final product was really good. My favorite was the Sun as a star because I usually don’t think of it as one.
A lot going on here–
This is really interesting. I like the fact that it is very simple to read but still gets your message across. I find that many poems lose some meaning because it takes too much effort to read. Also I liked the fact that you emphasized star in every line.
I liked how you described the various uses of the word star, in conjunction with many different ideas. I also thought it was aethestically pleasing that each of sentence took up exactly 1/5th of the star.
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