Visual Poem

June 9, 2010 § 2 Comments

Hi, my name is Dev Sharma and here is my visual poem for english class.



§ 2 Responses to Visual Poem

  • Valerie says:

    Works on some interesting levels–
    The outer circles seem the loudest, the biggest wave–
    I think of a kind of tree ring too, in which the core idea (that unhappiness is closest to true feeling/emotion) is invisible to the others.
    Dr. Fox

  • Kevin says:

    I liked your idea of using the series of rings. Happiness is the largest ring, but it is also the farthest one from the center. So perhaps happiness is sometimes used to mask the truth.

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