Word and Image
June 9, 2010 § 2 Comments
Hi, my name is Dev Sharma and here is my visual poem for english class.
Works on some interesting levels–
The outer circles seem the loudest, the biggest wave–
I think of a kind of tree ring too, in which the core idea (that unhappiness is closest to true feeling/emotion) is invisible to the others.
I liked your idea of using the series of rings. Happiness is the largest ring, but it is also the farthest one from the center. So perhaps happiness is sometimes used to mask the truth.
Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:
You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change )
You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change )
You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change )
You are commenting using your Google+ account. ( Log Out / Change )
Connecting to %s
Notify me of new comments via email.
« visual poem post
Visual Poetry »
You are currently reading Visual Poem at Collaborations and Visual Poems.
Create a free website or blog at WordPress.com.