Word and Image
May 29, 2011 § 1 Comment
Such a great image. Going through the poems from, I think everyone has overall done well with the form of the visual poem. Your flower is another addition. The stem is so interesting. I like how the base is “I”, because the self is basic. But the projections on the sides are outside of the self, perhaps learned. I interpreted them as being either petals or thorns. Which speaks to both the pain and beauty of life lessons.
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